1) A mainly Level 3 response but if you have time re adding the title of the questions at the beginning of each question as a heading.
2) Question 1: You have not answered the question: You need to begin each section with a reference to a thriller convention (see yellow coursework booklet re thriller genre conventions.
Say at the beginning of each section: I have used flashbacks which is a convention of film. I have done this to provide a back story to the assault on Rahim and it's connection to gambling and poker.
The flashbacks reference film noir which is a sub genre of the thriller and inter textually references film noir classics such as...
I have also used the convention of a deserted space, name a car park (then include your reference to Jackie Brown and the killing of Melanie in the car park in broad day light.
I have used the convention of a serious crime (then reference the driver of the car carrying the body down the slope in the early dawn light.
And so on.
Question 6: Explain the details of the tools you used when editing video and audio effects on Premiere Pro, to include how you achieved dissolve transitions and fade to black.
I will give you until Sunday to do this Luke because you submitted your first draft so early and this is a special concession to you because you are conscientious and consistently engaged.
At present mainly Level 3 but questions 1 and 6 Level 2.
Let me know by email if you want to do these revisions.
Keep this version Luke.
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2) Question 1: You have not answered the question: You need to begin each section with a reference to a thriller convention (see yellow coursework booklet re thriller genre conventions.
Say at the beginning of each section: I have used flashbacks which is a convention of film. I have done this to provide a back story to the assault on Rahim and it's connection to gambling and poker.
The flashbacks reference film noir which is a sub genre of the thriller and inter textually references film noir classics such as...
I have also used the convention of a deserted space, name a car park (then include your reference to Jackie Brown and the killing of Melanie in the car park in broad day light.
I have used the convention of a serious crime (then reference the driver of the car carrying the body down the slope in the early dawn light.
And so on.
Question 6: Explain the details of the tools you used when editing video and audio effects on Premiere Pro, to include how you achieved dissolve transitions and fade to black.
I will give you until Sunday to do this Luke because you submitted your first draft so early and this is a special concession to you because you are conscientious and consistently engaged.
At present mainly Level 3 but questions 1 and 6 Level 2.
Let me know by email if you want to do these revisions.
All comments have been addressed and the slideshow has been updated.
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