1) An extra space between the words in the titles 2) 0.16 time rather than place....say 4pm 3) 0.17 Quick fade to black 3) 0.26 A longer dissolve to indicate a flash back 4) Flash back to card game I suggest a sound bridge with diegetic sound from the car park. 5) Attack on Rahid, you need to bring in soundtrack here to emphasise the drama of the violence. 6) Not 1.30 pm as already dark, say 5pm 7) 1.27-8 keep sound of car engine over the top of this footage
1) An extra space between the words in the titles
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3) 0.17 Quick fade to black
3) 0.26 A longer dissolve to indicate a flash back
4) Flash back to card game I suggest a sound bridge with diegetic sound from the car park.
5) Attack on Rahid, you need to bring in soundtrack here to emphasise the drama of the violence.
6) Not 1.30 pm as already dark, say 5pm
7) 1.27-8 keep sound of car engine over the top of this footage
I like the dissolves at the end.
Well done Luke
Luke could you please add another Label: G321 Completed Productions and upload your final cut of your thriller which I signed off last week. Thanks
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